The pattern defintley has vibrating edges from what I can see and I like the pattern since it looks like it could be used as a textile. I just feel like the pattern is really tiny so unless you zoom in and look closely it doesn't come across as well. So maybe try to vary the size of the background pattern and maybe reworking the design of the shapes since like mine it tends to be overly simplified. So maybe play around with different shapes or maybe use the shape that you used in the background pattern but really big.
The pattern is very successful and i see the start of vibrating edges, if you increased the size of the pattern either in your oval/rectangular shapes or on the outside and upped the contrast or saturation on both but make them different. Would really make the piece vibrate.
Your pattern exemplifies vibrating edges. I am unsure if it was my computer's resolution, but based off of what I saw I sense a very robotic atmosphere. You accomplished that very well with the oval / spherical objects. It is harder to see the smaller parts, but all together I can tell you have a pattern with vibrating edges.
The pattern defintley has vibrating edges from what I can see and I like the pattern since it looks like it could be used as a textile. I just feel like the pattern is really tiny so unless you zoom in and look closely it doesn't come across as well. So maybe try to vary the size of the background pattern and maybe reworking the design of the shapes since like mine it tends to be overly simplified. So maybe play around with different shapes or maybe use the shape that you used in the background pattern but really big.
ReplyDeleteThe pattern is very successful and i see the start of vibrating edges, if you increased the size of the pattern either in your oval/rectangular shapes or on the outside and upped the contrast or saturation on both but make them different. Would really make the piece vibrate.
ReplyDeleteYour pattern exemplifies vibrating edges. I am unsure if it was my computer's resolution, but based off of what I saw I sense a very robotic atmosphere. You accomplished that very well with the oval / spherical objects. It is harder to see the smaller parts, but all together I can tell you have a pattern with vibrating edges.
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